"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

A Poem by Chris
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yes

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"Dreams And..."
Seems we live in the starlight,
and dream as we follow the sunlight -
eyes and breath drawn to
golden warmth and filling mellow heat
that holds all that we are,
were,
will be...
as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us...
and our taste IS
the breath we exhale,
and our thoughts are 
the flow of senses
and woven nows
that blend existence into futures past
and presents that become...
dreams and...
me's.
Chris

© 2016 Chris


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I feel in love with this and I agree the "as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..." is too perfect! Look forward to reading more!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your pausing and look forward to your return
A wonderful journey in your words and thoughts my friend.
"as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..."
The above lines are perfect. I like the places you took the reader to. Thank you Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very well written Chris...keep it up, the good work...looking up for more stuffs from u !💐

Posted 7 Years Ago


'our taste IS -- the breath we exhale, -- and our thoughts are -- the flow of senses -- and woven nows.. '

Night dreams an' plans an' picnics can escape us.. making for the distant hills.. BUT oh those daydreams, the ones that capture us for seconds at a time and.. leave us wanting.. more. My thoughts after reading your words, you nudge thoughts and emotions, you do, sir. .

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

Its been awhile Em, hope life is being nice.
Chris, a well-composed, free flowing verse that leaves the reader satisfied.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

But does it really? Does life really? Fair questions I think.
Beautifully written. Touches the heart, once again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

Ahhhhhhhhhhh... a captive audience...
Nice writing with nice choice of words... simply loving it.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

Thank you for pausing AND for leaving your thoughts... hope you return.
This was like a breath of fresh air. It's amazing, the connections that are formed in life - how souls and beings and moments can all blend into one beautiful experience. I loved this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chris

7 Years Ago

Hi Edana... interesting choice of pause. We - each of us - touch upon others and hence touch our se.. read more
T.  Edana Talbott

7 Years Ago

Couldn't agree more!
How strange it is for people to mold together over time. It's put so well.
I am imagining it molding like clay.
Thanks

Posted 7 Years Ago


I simply loved the way you left your thoughts free, yet sensitive....in this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago



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