"Listening To The Rain..."

"Listening To The Rain..."

A Poem by Chris
"

...we do that don't we...

"

We don't always know how we'll react to a "voice", a sound, thoughts …perceptions… or even a …now.

 

 

“Listening To The Rain…”

 

So many whispers echo behind the eyes,

wishes soft of future past

and tomorrow's never come -

and silly lil tears that burn

and meander round-and-around

and around -

a silence so vast

that the echoes…

the echoes …cry.

 

Chris

 


© 2018 Chris


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The echoes cry, listening to the rain, great poem, the lines are sparse but full of meaning,

Posted 6 Months Ago


Chris

6 Months Ago

There are really, really long sequenced "thoughts" within the 41-ish pages posted here at WC... and .. read more
I've always felt there's a strange connection between listening to the rain and past memories cropping back up, no matter how they happen. The inner silence can be deadly...
Lovely expressions here. Nice reading you.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Chris

7 Months Ago

It's been awhile, nice seeing you here again.
A timely poem for today, just not raining

Posted 8 Months Ago


Oh I've reviewed this before but that wasn't hardly a review. Anyways, I did mention the personification of the rain which stood out to me nicely. I think by putting personalities on things like that can make us appreciate and understand those things more. Once we start seeing the characterization and beauty of an object/thing it becomes a piece of us we cherish. Poetry speaks life with words, and you did just that! Very nice, Chris.
Have a nice day!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

9 Months Ago

Of course! :D
Chris

9 Months Ago

Chuckling here... it really IS good seeing you.
Sarah_Allen

9 Months Ago

:)))))) nice seeing you too
Heart searing. Your writing is as always beautiful. I wish I had something more profound to say than that. But I don't so I'll leave it at that.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chris

9 Months Ago

What is more profound than being touched that deeply?
Sadness mixed with begrudging acceptance...I always carrying g that little nugget around with me in a lint filled pocket. Good write... got me thinking.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chris

9 Months Ago

It's what we as poets attempt to do...
Wonderful poetry shared Chris. Merry Christmas to you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chris

9 Months Ago

Merry Christmas and the best of New Years for you John!
A very deep poem. I enjoyed it. I love listening to the rain when I can't sleep so I have my bluetooth facemask play the sound of rian.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chris

9 Months Ago

The rhythm is calming to me as well...
Deep and emotional, I enjoyed this write.
Felt kinda of sad in a way as well.
Nicely expressed

Posted 10 Months Ago


Chris

10 Months Ago

Coffee and the early mornings "darkness" leads to many pauses...
Sometimes the reintroduction of a person, or a place, and maybe just a remembrance of a time has power that we are unaware of

Posted 11 Months Ago


Chris

11 Months Ago

...and sometimes we well KNOW that "power" all too well...

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