"Magyk..."

Part of "A Rising Thunder" for now.

"Magyk..."

Magyk

is ...a mind's weave
that brings us back
at whim
to pauses and the need to catch
our breaths over and over - again.

is ...a life's weave
that holds us where we stand
as images flicker behind our eyes
and fingertips touch - again.

Magyk is a heart's tears
falling in our nights
that mingle and merge
- with the stardust,
and fade with the pale moonlight.

It's all and ever dreams.

some mine, some yours ...it seems.
And in the end
well, that's what we have
and it's held so gently tight
caught 'tween our fingers' tips
and pressed to wishing lips.

Magyk is...
you in me
and if we ever, ever disagree
it's still you...
in me

Chris

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

I really enjoyed this piece - simple and lovely imagery, easy flow of rhyme - and a definition of the magyk that surrounds us, and is in us.

[Chris]

Nice to see wandering my toughts... thank you for yours in return.

[Brittany]

I love this.

[WhiteWillow]

"...and its held so gently tight..." Love that juxtaposition.

Magyk is what we make it, what we think it is, what we want it to be. In whatever form we believe it exisits, acknowledgement is all it takes to put it to good use.

Magyk is as the love for language in English misses the so here usual "K" as magic is wonderful in your way. Deep underlayed feelings, of missing the one, you had once so next to you. Some people underneeth here, do not understand the longing of a heart, they are to blocked to understand. Nice work Chris! like the butterfly is the symbol of ones who aren't around us anymore, your words illuminate. Magyk? Yes. Definitely!

E.L.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like the confluence of breath and being, being explored in this poem. I like your use of language and this memorable spelling of MAGYK. Thanks

[Judas Hammer]

I see the holding breath is a theme in your poetry. It looked cool but the feeling was contrite. The rhyming was a little simple for a piece trying to be deep, don't you think. I tried to feel this just again, it lack experience. Nice try

[sharonlee]

Sigh...mesmerisingly beautiful.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I want to dream and know that Magyk forever and a day .. ..
That need to catch our breath, over and over .. ..

To find Love that was, again .. ..

Simply Perfection .. Jazz

[emmajoy]

' Magyk is... you in me and if we ever, ever disagree it's still you... in me' ~~ your lines create your own review, your gentle heart spills into words and hugs them close. Sweet dreams and beautiful.