At the Bus Stop

Sounds

Motors-“vroom”

 

“Click, click,” of heels

 

Chatter

 

Fans- the whir of them

 

Clapping of feet hitting pavement

in a run

 

“Clipity clop” of cars

going over speed bumps

 

The clicking of a pen

The shrieking of a bird

Metal against glass

Waiting for the bus

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

close your eyes and you hear as well as you see.That some places are as recogniozaBLE BY SOUND AS SIGHT

[Andy Ruffett]

It's true.

[Tim]

I'm impressed with the meter in this one. Each line flowed with fluidity. Nice images too. I like the detail too. Nice one.

[Andy Ruffett]

Thanks.

[x]

Yawn

[Andy Ruffett]

I'm disappointed you didn't enjoy it. Hopefully another writing of mine will peak your interest.