Insane

Insane

A Poem by Andrea Vargas

With crys of pain,

the once innocent,

fell to shame,

and walked the path,

no sane man could tame,

and as they walked,

more came to follow,

cutting into life,

until all hearts were hollow,

and at the end,

they all lost there life,

for the truly insane,

came at them,

with a very sharp knife..

© 2011 Andrea Vargas


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Sharp, clever and relevant, a loving piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice rhyme, good structure and very emotive and descriptive. Great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2011
Last Updated on September 12, 2011

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Andrea Vargas
Andrea Vargas

Ontario, CA



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I have been apart of this site for awhile and have written of romance and pain and many other different genres.. and i have come across many fantastic poets. Poetry has taught me so much, it has h.. more..

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