Silent

I just watched a movie and decided to write a poem, not sure what the movie was called tho, its from the 1990's tho (:

 

Horror so tantilizing,

it consumes and follows my fate,

leading off with despair and a suttle pain in the air,

 

Riding alone with death by my side,

Knowing the truth of how he truly died.

 

my friend who lived,

 

He is around every corner,

pealing at my desperate fears,

The truth must escape the mourner,

 

he says,

he whisphers so clearly.

 

I took his  life,

I tore him down,

 A bloody knife and a ruined gown.

 

Desperaate this truth I hide from you,

From him,

from myself.

 

The truth shall stay unknown,

and his life undiscovered,

and my sanity alone.

 

All is left,

what was once,

and now is none.

 

I'm sorry.

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think (: honestly

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is powerful. I loved the message here...xx

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooo... kept me on edge... not sure what the hell ur watching but must have been one great horror ((murder mystery)) to inspire such a piece...
awesome word play!!

[THWebb]

Fear, impulsive and loss of control. Very well writtnen.

[Enigma]

Creepy and impressive. Loved it.

[stars are far]

This was so nice
you wrote that well :)

[Desmund Tiny]

even though I don't know the movie it gives me creeps. Great write


and you misspelled the word "Desperate"


^^,

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I don't think I've seen the movie, but I like this poem...It is very eerie, and you have written this with an air of mystery... Well done!

[Seshat Nidaba]

1. Riding alone with death by my side,

Knowing the truth of how he truly died.

I think the movie is way too scary for me! Vivid write.