The final Crack

The final Crack

A Poem by Andrea Vargas

There is this desirable pain that has conquered my life for years,

It tears at my soul and sends vilolent attacks to my heart,

leaving it bruised , cracked, and seared,

I wish there was a way to depart,

Yet the lies still relish and the understanding never comes.

 

The darkest decay of pain has finally grasped hold of my heart </3

 

The last crack has been punched in deep,

but the idea of death only seems smart.

 

Bye

 

 

© 2012 Andrea Vargas


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Raw emotion. You penned it well. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was written in a so nice way..
But it is sad .. I loved that.. Hope you never feel it ...
Well done =D

Posted 7 Years Ago


WOW!!! your ending "BYE" packs this piece with one hell of a punch!! such a sad hand behind this write, reaching out... you expressed well here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Stament and grand standed, well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


speaks out,
love it

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Andrea Vargas
Andrea Vargas

Ontario, CA



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I have been apart of this site for awhile and have written of romance and pain and many other different genres.. and i have come across many fantastic poets. Poetry has taught me so much, it has h.. more..

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