... and you will excel!

... and you will excel!

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Quote about finding our inner vigours ...

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�Open up your minds and souls,
let passions invade and conquer you,
let them guide you,
and you will excel!
For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,
and more gratifying than all the
money in this world will ever be �!�

© 2008 Angel Bird


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Good outlook on life,
If you can believe in yourself and have conviction in your beliefs
there can be no value placed on that and you will be fulfilled
Nice work, Angel
J.P.O.et

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a real dignity and strength to this write and even though you said what you wanted to say in a few words those words and thoughts resonate. This almost feels like an anthem of sorts or even a spoken word piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very wise writing, love the mediatative feeling of it
il liked this one very much

thank you for entering my contest

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and wise and also a very good answer to my questions. Thank you for your kind word and this lovely poem, it opens the eyes of the blind.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

cool. wise words indeed
jaff

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful weave of heartfelt words....Good Write! xo

For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,














Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is something I would have longed for my father to say to me as a child. it is beautifully heartfelt. Affirmation to people we love is so important and your piece so softly and gently puts it in few words. Lovely!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

True and well said !

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yeah fooooollllow your dreams........ kind of poem... i liked it.... a listen to your heart kind of deal. Good poem i really enjoyed it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful thought and sentiment. I love the hopefulness of your lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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