... and you will excel!

... and you will excel!

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Quote about finding our inner vigours ...

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�Open up your minds and souls,
let passions invade and conquer you,
let them guide you,
and you will excel!
For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,
and more gratifying than all the
money in this world will ever be �!�

© 2008 Angel Bird


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I was wondering when your muse was going to drop by again - he (or she) is around less than Santa Clause. :( But, I am glad for the return of the muse.

"For everything you do
with passion and strong belief
will create brilliant perfection,
and your reward will be exceeding,
and more gratifying than all the
money in this world will ever be �!""

What the frig is the point of money? Passion is where it is at!

Great write!

-Gabe


Posted 14 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and true to heart. If only all of us would follow a true passions and not only chase the mighty dollar.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 14 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful observation. And an uplifting piece of writing. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Oh i so can feel this. the passions that release us from the realm of normal life. I sense it everytime i let the water from a water fall cascade down on me! The feeling is wonderfully freeing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful...this piece definitely puts pep in my step, thank you! :-)


Perfect ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


6 of 7 people found this review constructive.

I truly loved this, i agree with ordinary woman, there needs to be more of this. great message.

Posted 14 Years Ago


6 of 7 people found this review constructive.

This made me smile. I wish to read more like this as this is what the world needs more of. You have a way with words and a wonderful and important message here. Exceptional, indeed.

Thank you to Robert whom sent it to me. My day now has been started off correctly. Many thx...

Posted 14 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

This was cool! It reminded me of something the God should have said in the old testiment!
It rings with profound wisdom, and strength of live and vitality.
Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

I loved this. Flow your heart it will lead you to where you're meant to be. Very true and powerful stated. The wisdom is in the strength of the poetic flow and passion this piece holds by itself. I still have this playing back in my head. I appreciate your word capturing my attention with purposeful and clarity.


Well Done!!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


6 of 7 people found this review constructive.

This is a really strong and motivating piece; I think on the 6th line you meant to write "beliefs". I dug this from the heart drop. :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.


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