Didn't you see?

Haiku 2

 

 

 

 

       - Why destroy all this?

       - Did you not see the beauty?

       - Pure grace of flowers? 

      

Reviews

[vanishing]

Angel
Reading this for exactly what is being said
makes perfect sense
in light of a once paradise
turned corporation:truly money- greedy desire ect
Changing what was once a beautiful planet
But people such as the author in this writing
project the postive perspective
with inspirational effect
Thanks

[justink :):)]

well i think it is a good haiku if i knew what one is


justintime

[Nicholas Hallows]

This is another really good haiku - typically my least favourite form of poetry.
I think it is clever when they ask the reader a question because that way despite having minimal words the thought continues to grow in the reader's mind.
Nice.
NH

[Rain]

I'm with you. I need to learn, but I need more room to stretch. I just don't think I can sqeeze all those thought in. :) Rain..

[Trish]

This is very nice. I like the way it is in the form of questions.

[Silent Pacer]

I really like the message of this Haiku, and I agree with it completely. I am a bit of an activist, and this poem provides a great message others should consider. very nice job.

[J.P.O.et]

Haiku is so hard
trying to express so much in so few words but
you are doing well for this says all that you intended
Always a pleasure, Angel
J.P.O.et

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Nice, haiku is so short and sweet. But this haiku can be ellaborated on. I could take these wonderful 3 stanzas and write even more on the idea, and it would be a subject of longing, and heartache...as if to say: i am beautiful, graceful, a woman, why are you destroying it with your powerful and rough hands, piercing my beauty with your silent insensitivity.??...anyway, you inspired me...thanks. talk later