Didn't you see?

Didn't you see?

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Haiku 2

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       - Why destroy all this?

       - Did you not see the beauty?

       - Pure grace of flowers? 

      

© 2011 Angel Bird


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Angel
Reading this for exactly what is being said
makes perfect sense
in light of a once paradise
turned corporation:truly money- greedy desire ect
Changing what was once a beautiful planet
But people such as the author in this writing
project the postive perspective
with inspirational effect
Thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well i think it is a good haiku if i knew what one is


justintime

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is another really good haiku - typically my least favourite form of poetry.
I think it is clever when they ask the reader a question because that way despite having minimal words the thought continues to grow in the reader's mind.
Nice.
NH

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm with you. I need to learn, but I need more room to stretch. I just don't think I can sqeeze all those thought in. :) Rain..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very nice. I like the way it is in the form of questions.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the message of this Haiku, and I agree with it completely. I am a bit of an activist, and this poem provides a great message others should consider. very nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haiku is so hard
trying to express so much in so few words but
you are doing well for this says all that you intended
Always a pleasure, Angel
J.P.O.et

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, haiku is so short and sweet. But this haiku can be ellaborated on. I could take these wonderful 3 stanzas and write even more on the idea, and it would be a subject of longing, and heartache...as if to say: i am beautiful, graceful, a woman, why are you destroying it with your powerful and rough hands, piercing my beauty with your silent insensitivity.??...anyway, you inspired me...thanks. talk later

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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