gone with the wind

 

 

If only the wind could

 

- blow away all the pain in this world

 

- heal all the hurting wounds in flesh

 

- soothe all the tortured souls

 

- glue together all the pieces of the many broken hearts

 

- erase all colors of the skins , and make them all the same

 

- let richness and greed as much as poorness disappear, and get people to see and believe again in the really important things in life

 

- fill all the empty stomachs on this planet with food and drink

 

- make us forget about hate and teach us forgiveness

 

- clean the air we all -plants -animals and -humans breathe around the globe

 

- allow all over this world peoples faces to smile in happiness, kid's eyes to shine in wonderment and lover's eyes to sparkle

 

 

- .....

 

If the wind could really create such miracles, then ... I'd pray for high winds to constantly breeze over our all Mother Earth! 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

It may, the winds of change rearrange the textures of truth. A beadth of spirit rise us up like leaves and tumble the trials of the world up to the heavens of equity.

For this would I too pray and hope the measure of our generality perceptively change upon that winds of, if only... a beautiful sentiment.

[oceanpoet]

loved the last line especially, nice ending

[oceanpoet]

what a lovely poem

[poetic soul]

this is a thought - provoking read... sends across a very meaningful and important message! vibrant thoughts!! nice read..

:)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

There are no words for this poem except for Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[sk8tagirl95]

amazing, i have no words to describe the things that came rushing through my mind. brilliant job :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes nature is a miracle itself it is to bad that it couldn't spread that gift back to humanity, really stunning piece, I really love it.

[Tator Of Suburbia]

wow.... i really don't know what else to say for this. I am truly impressed. thank you for submitting to my contest!

[Emily Rose]

"erase all colors of the skins , and make them all the same" - but if we were all the same then where would we be different? I see what you're saying here and oh the idealist in me is singing, but I think I agree more with your sentiments about tolerence and forgiveness. I think a better world would be one in which we could revel in and celebrate our diversity as human beings rather than pointing fingers and discriminating. I think this is what you're going for here, though, isn't it? :-)

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This is very good. Love the way you want the wind to blow away all the crap in the world. a wish to make all happy. Thanks so much for entering my contest. Good luck.