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Created for a Cinquain Poetry contest

 

   -   Greed
   -   Bad Feature
   -   Take, Clutch, Cheat
   -   Always Wishing For More
   -   Avarice

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write on a few words

Well done

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I felt like you wrote this about someone I know ..it pretty much descibes them.powerful words do not need alot to help them stand and these stand well just as you placed them very good work.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well done!

[Kimberly Smith]

wow nicely said and done lol

[Wolfwind Words]

All I can say is..."Scrooge McDuck" :)
I think you have captured the epitome of this anti-virtue.

Well done!

Aaron

[The DuchessPoet]

Interesting...

[Emily B]

good luck in the contest. . .

[Salvatore Buttaci]

In brevity much is said. Good poem.

Sal

[just is]

Simple and to the point well said.

i love it. it's simple and eloquent and paints the picture of the average self obsessed person.
great write
-ST