Tears

Tears

A Poem by Angel With A Shotgun
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I know it's awful, but whatever.

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My eyes beg me to stop crying.
My brain begs me to stop thinking.
My heart begs for a break.
Me? I beg for him. 

I beg for a friend to be there as I cry my eyes out.
I beg for someone to just listen without turning the attention to them.
I beg for a happy ending.
I beg for once, just once, to get what I want.

I'm not some silly brokenhearted girl.
This isn't a break, this is an ache.
I ache to feel his arms around me.
I ache to feel his love directed at me.

There is so much fear in my heart.
I fear you won't come back to me.
I fear that I'll never feel the way I did with you.
I fear that I'll be this way forever.

© 2014 Angel With A Shotgun


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I don't think this poem is awful, I think it's amazing. It's raw, I can kind of feel how you must've felt when writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work.
-S.R.

100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


I don't think that this is awful at all, it's brilliant.

It's very raw and as I read each word, I can feel that this must have been quite personal for you. To read something so seemingly honest, seems as if you are putting a piece of you into each stanza.

Good work, I really enjoyed it.

(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Angel With A Shotgun

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

It is personal, yes. I didn't edit this poem at all, just simply wrote what .. read more
Roberta

9 Years Ago

Well then it's even more brilliant. I think all the best writing comes from the heart.

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Angel With A Shotgun

9 Years Ago

My heart is currently experiencing pain and heart break. It seems to be the only time I actually lik.. read more

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Added on May 27, 2014
Last Updated on May 27, 2014
Tags: heartbreak, love, pain

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Angel With A Shotgun
Angel With A Shotgun

Romeoville, IL



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