I'd rather die

I would rather be in pain than feel nothing.

Blood falls like rain
My hear set ablaze
My life flashing before my eyes
I am numb, Feeling nothing
Seeing nothing, no one
Hearing nothing
Nothing beneath me, am i falling?
I don't know, im suffering by not suffering
cut me, hurt me, make me bleed
Just let me feel again
I would rather die than feel nothing
I would rather be in pain than numb
No breath, am I suffocating?
I am! I feel my heart ripped out
He did it, he tore out my heart
Yet he still says he loves me
Prove it I say
Anymore and i could go numb again,
But i guess this pain is better than nothing
I would rather die than feel nothing

Author's Note

This just came to me out of nowhere haha its a bit raw but i think its good.

Reviews

[Allister]

Some of us know this pain oh so well the one we just can't put our finger on or hold in our hand or take medication for or even see but it's there and it hurts like hell
I can only say that what doesn't break us helps to make us the person we become, stronger and more resilient to what our personal world throws at us.
Nicely done yet again Kiki.

[Kyla H]

Oh raw poetry is the best, the emotions and feel is stronger than any other. Anyway, this poem is nice and conveys such a lonely feeling that the reader themselves will be drawn into your own little world. Nicely done.

[Tasha]

Its even more raw(if that's possible), it is still really good and captivating.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Tasha]

Wow, this was raw but really good and captivating.
♥ Ta'Shandra