My dear, were have you gone?

My dear, were have you gone?

A Poem by Devilish_Light
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Please read... My dear friend....

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What hepened to us?
I know we live far away but we have ways to talk
Why wont you tell me anymore?
Your pain is my pain babe we go through things together
Sweetie what happened to forever?
I'm always here for you, you know that
Why don't you tell me your pain anymore?
We share the same everything
Why did you lock me out?
Please let me back in
We can be one again

© 2011 Devilish_Light


Author's Note

Devilish_Light
Dear Kiri sweetie please read. :(

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Some people find it hard to express the empty space in their lives caused by the loss or contact with someone or something they had strong feelings for and you Kiki said so much in so few but poignant words keep being true to your feelings as well as to those that matter in your life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sounds like the character in the poem describes that a person in another location has not made contact because he doesnt want to worry her and she is aware of it and is letting know she is willing to support.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a very emotional piece, the tone almost holds a feeling of strife, but yet you still cling to the thought of rejoining with this person. A very nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people find it hard to express the empty space in their lives caused by the loss or contact with someone or something they had strong feelings for and you Kiki said so much in so few but poignant words keep being true to your feelings as well as to those that matter in your life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Baby I love you!!! I'm sorry. I figured you didn't need any of MY pain.... :/

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Devilish_Light
Devilish_Light

Davenport, FL



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I am Kiki. I love to write! Usually write really dark stories. I am the troubled youth of tomorrow, and the light at the end of your tunnel. I am the new beat you choose to dance to, and the dan.. more..

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