Stabbed in the Heart

Stabbed in the Heart

A Poem by Tiffany the Pyro
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It's a really sad poem. Sorry.

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Stabbed in the Heart

I trusted you for all these years
Whispering my secrets to your ear.
You said that you would never tell
But now my life's a living hell.

I fear to even turn my back
For you may be in any crack.
I showered you with all my love
But you looked down on me from above.

You were my closest friend
And this is something we cannot mend.
But you wanna know the worst part?
You stabbed me right in the heart.

Tiffany the Pyro

© 2011 Tiffany the Pyro


Author's Note

Tiffany the Pyro
Sorry bout the sadness.

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Amazing poem! It is very simple, but meaningful. I congratulate you, this poem is excellent. I have no suggestions, I think you did it perfectly :) Thanks for sharing with us, look forward to reading more of your work.

100/100

PS: Don't apologize for sadness. All of us have our genres, and sometimes sadness is one of them :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow i really enjoyed this :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really a well done poem. All I have to say is again, don't be sorry for the sadness. If that's what it takes to write with authentic emotion, you have nothing you could possibly apologize for. :) Can't wait to read more of your work in the future.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poem! It is very simple, but meaningful. I congratulate you, this poem is excellent. I have no suggestions, I think you did it perfectly :) Thanks for sharing with us, look forward to reading more of your work.

100/100

PS: Don't apologize for sadness. All of us have our genres, and sometimes sadness is one of them :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2011
Last Updated on June 7, 2011
Tags: heart, stabbed, sadness, depressing

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Tiffany the Pyro
Tiffany the Pyro

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I am 13 years old. Not living a very happy life. You will find most of my poems are sad and depressing. Sorry 'bout that. I enjoy writing when I can. I hate writer's block. I enjoy hanging out with my.. more..

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