A Story by **AngelicDemon**

               Oh my god this is really happening.I think to myself. John leans in and kisses me softly,I wrap my arms around him.A couple minutes later he unzips my denim jacket,only leaving me in a tank top and shorts.He kisses my neck,and I sigh.Then I realize why I wanted him to come over.I need to confront him.

      Memory of earlier today flood my mind.This morning I was going to write John a love note in class saying a poem I think it went something like this:

               With hair as black as night

               And eyes as tempting as the forbidden fruits

               Your the only reason I live any more

               I wish you really knew how I feel...

      Why can't I remeber.I ask myself.John's hand slips under my shirt,and I try to push John off,but he had a strong hold.I move my mouth away from him.

              "What are you doing?"I ask.He laughs.

              " What are you talking about,Sara?"He asks.

               "Why can't remember anything?"I push him off,and he backs away.He stares at me,and I think he starts to realize I'm smarter than the other victims,but I start to feel light headed.I lean on the wall for suport                

             "Don't fight it."He says seriously,And My worse fears are confirmed.He walks closer,to the point where we're nose to nose.I feel suduced,He leans ,but this time he kisses my neck.From my jawline to my shoulder. I'm out of breath,and my blood turns to stone.I start to forget more,like what I ate for lunch.

                  "It's a shame,I'll have to kill you,like the others.You were too smart for your own good." He says,soothingly.I feel a sharp pain in my neck,and try and push him off,but I can find the power to.I start to feel even more light headed,and the room starts to spin.


The last thing I remeber was the slurping sound of my blood being drunk out of me.               

© 2013 **AngelicDemon**

Author's Note

Sorry guys If the grammar jacked up,just tell me and i'll fix it
And i was my first time writing a poem(or something close to one)
I also wanted to get a picture of a cute vampire but all there was,
were Edwards so I didn't want the people who don't like twilight frustrated,So I settled with fangs ;)

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Ooo...I like this! ^-^ I love vampires so much and I love this story so much

Posted 11 Years Ago

Okay, even though the only vampire related stuff I like is the anime Vampire Knight, I have to say I like this story. Even though it wasn't long, I like the way you wrote it. Nice job. :) And thank you for not putting a pic of Edward for it!!! *shivers*

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is awesome. You should write more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


11 Years Ago

This is awesome. You should write more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

I like it.^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

I love it.I wish it continued. Very good cliffhanger. It makes the imagination take flight. Love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Its lovely and dark, a sweet combination like honey and wine. Your words are written beautifully.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice story

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on January 9, 2013
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Fort Worth, TX

Hello I'm 13 years old and ever since 5th grade i've loved reading,but never really was interested in writing,but last year i was feeling extra creative and decided to write,and i loved it. Out o.. more..