Heat

Her beauty unfolds in a smoothed tongue sheath as palpable as pulse

Oh, how I worship your descent
Upon my glass exhale,
Balancing on opalescent wings
Etched in the iridescent glow
Of heaven's realms,
Blazing the raze of my fragile whispers
Your firmament fills my dream horizon,
And masked shadows flow in liquid fervour, through
Clasped palms, cupped
Savouring the essence
Found in the grail of release...
You consume me, one breath at a time,
As scents of amber orchids intoxicate our souls

 

 

Rage upon my delicate calm
Into the shallow of my flesh
Desperate to absorb the touch of your hands
Pressing against molten skin,
Wet in the fire of a sacred invasion,
Firm fingertips press against lace,
Deeper into the penance,
Confession's hummed
In the dusk of our silhouettes,

Tremors in the silence an obsidian delirium....

 

 

Slip me softly into the pocket of your dreams,
As  dawn hushes the veiled scent of your
Body still fresh upon mine,
I will wait for you to find me again,
Beyond the mirror of our eyes
Undulating in velvet currents
Of a love that redefines destiny;

Interpret these scriptures my love
And you will find me there,
Waiting....

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Seriously, who are you? This would be what god would have saved' on his laptop under 'passionate poetry' if he had one that is. Your poetry is brilliant, moving and the heat is, yes, palpable. You certainly know how to rapid fire a pulse, excellent read, as always.

[Angel of Heart's]

You made me ~smile~ Beautiful Lady...:) Thank You so much for the beauty and warmth of your reply, it touches me deeply...

[Neon]

What a lovely poem once again you just wrote right from the depth of your heart. I loved this piece. Nicely inked. The straightforwardness of your frames's very brilliant. Structure's good, blue inked words're looking beautiful with the poem and i made my interest reading this piece very smoothly. Thanks for making such a splendid piece of your artistry. I enjoyed reading the wonderful poem.

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Mind blowing profound my friend! My gosh I am just setting here taking all you say in and I am like lost for words:) Your are wow so so breath taking with every write I have ever seen so far not read them all but I will! You better never stop writing! if you I will hunt you down and kid nap you be like that movie about that writer and that lady kid naps him taking a sledge hammer to his feet ,I would do ya like that thow lol! Id be setting down with you saying don't ever stop writing,Your words scream from the pages!

[Angel of Heart's]

Jonathan I thank you so much for taking time to wander my words...it makes this heart smile to know that you discovered beauty here
I do so appreciate you and am humbled by your comment........:)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your so welcome my dear friend:) You hold a true beauty very much shows and stands,Your rite there with sunsets and a moon coming up!

[Wórdsmíth]

What the expensive you are...? your writin''s touchable, it's a fire about writin', that you know. well written' your IInd stanza's nice, blueish colorin''s good as well. Idea's quite appropriate to analyse your words.
that's amazin' write. well written.
good luck 4 your next writin'

[zainul]

Lost and found myself in the beauty of the amazing piece and awesome image.
Wonder how steady a poet may be in sharing her experience :)

["writing by" KS]

Perfect imaginary Angel. Beautifully wrote. I loved it.. thank you :)

[Angel of Heart's]

Thank you beautiful one....you have smiled my heart :)

["writing by" KS]

:) x

[.]

oh wowww what an inflaming poem...i love it...

[Angel of Heart's]

Your enthusiasm warms my heart....thank you so :)

[.]

you are very talented poetess it is the least I can leave

[Ken Simm.]

Gossamer I think is the word.

[Angel of Heart's]

Thank you dear one....'Gossamer' is just beautiful :)

[quinfinn]

it is truly rare indeed to find someone who consistently writes with such fervor and passion without missing a beat. there is a song in this write, and i am loathe to ignore its presence, so gentle, so sensual and so very exquisite to all the senses. utterly gorgeous write!

[Angel of Heart's]

Oh thank you beautiful man ....you send me warmth on a cold night...your heart-prints are so welcome on my page.....;)

[quinfinn]

your welcome and...........thank you!