Dig Deeply..

Dig Deeply..

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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this is about .. the body of art a person has and it is about reading..and seeing the journey of an artist..not just the top of the list..reading in the Archives

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Dig deep, my friends it's not on the cover

nor even the first page, that smile that slipped

that tangible tear.


I say sometimes is not enough dig deep always.

Dig deep there is a heart broken somewhere .

Shuffle and deal your self a Royal flush.



Dig deep .

These voices echo through long passage of time and swim with the fishes.


Excuse the thickness of emotional pages piled one upon the other

but this is in fact an accurate account.


Dig deep my friends, because it is a climb deep down into the canyon of my soul

and it's a waterfall.


It's about looking up and those beautiful rays of sun that pierce the clouds.


Dig deep .

It's about climbing up on rope of time , it's about being chased by bees.


Turn the pages fast and it is a flip book , it's movies and popcorn.

It's climbing trees and broken glass.


I am growing right before your eyes, I am blue skies and thunderous storms.

Dig deeply , this treasure Is not hid under a rainbow , but it is none the less a spectrum and a spectacle and it is a mirror where you and I are fascinated by how much we look alike.


Dig deep, because that is how I have always been.


Naomi Montana Walsh.

2010

© 2010 Naomi Montana Walsh


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if you dig deep enough, you pull out a little be of your soul...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, I really like this! It feels, to me, like a speech of some sort. Like an epic moment in a movie where a character is fed up, marches on stage, and takes the wheels of the presentation and just lays it all out there. This is very strong, and very true to life. I love the various images evoked, the skies, clouds, storms. It's beautiful!
The only thing I noticed for constructive criticism is in the last bit, I think you meant "hidden" rather than "hid". :3
Wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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