Don't ask me...

When you see the tears in her eyes ...
... don't ask me ... why ...
... I will lie you ...
... but you should beside her ...
... hug ...
... and both silent ...
... for Her silence is a drug ...
... when you see Her sad eyes ...
... you willn't know the reason of this grief ...
... don't ask why ...
... She willn't tell you a truth ...
... because She is different ...
... She have her own world ...
... She is closing on itself all the pain ...
... she want to strangle him and then cry ...
... she is crying often ...
... Everybody are thinking obout her like at twisted girl ...
... who is laughing all the time ...
... but she is laughing, to don't cry ...
... if you look deeply into her eyes ...
... you will know the truth ...
... just like this you can see what she is feeling ...

Reviews

[mango]

This writing is a very accurate expressive of inward pain and suffering trying to get out and to be known, but know one seem to recognize it, so suffering continues alone, silently and the writing is the only way to express it or just simply go insane. Keep writing, keep expressing remember when no one else is there God and His love is all around. He is there.

[Antonio Valentino]

I enjoyed this.

"... she want to strangle him and then cry ..."

I've known a few woman that would fit that description before, and without the crying afterwards part :)

This was great.
Antonio xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. The turmoil of life effect each of us different. Sometime we can get twist up. Let it built up till we are like a bomb ready to blow up. Cures are good friends and a good road trip away.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautiful, so tender, so sadly moving. You touch on how people so often hide who they really are. Excellent.

[Doctor JKC]

Asking "why" always comes off as an accusation.
Silence and holding are the way to go;
then simple listening.
A very effective form that lends itself
to the message.

Jack

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this

[MarkGMelvin]

lovely words the pic is nice as well.
eloquent well done,

peace
wmmelvin

[Tony]

You want this person, you speak to, to really feel your emotions and you are trying to express yourself with all of your heart, I feel that within your words. Very emotional.

Antony

[Charles]

I like the format here and the idea behind the eyes and the lies (on the part of the writer, the girl and the reader).