Your Karma Pays You Back Soon!

Your Karma Pays You Back Soon!

A Story by Anjali
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Here's a short story of how your karma will pay you back sooner. So Always try to keep it simple silly!

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"He left her on a rainy day
He never saw her tears!"



Present Day:

She has beautiful eyes
People compliment her not knowing how much pain and suffering her eyes have endured

Rewinding the Past:



Her eyes met his
His eyes met hers
Their heart beats synced
Cupid strike and Love Blossomed
They were deeply into each other
Unaware of the future

Family Reprimanded
Society Warned

Yet they faced the storm and hurdles together
Their love stayed strong and the trust lasted longer
Not knowing when they can take it to another level



She was his support
He was the whole world to her
And their love was epic for many years

One day Suddenly, they lost touch with each other
Unknown and Unaware of the mighty storm along with a three letter word "EGO" had the strength to break a twelve letter word "RELATIONSHIP" of so many years

He bid her the last GOODBYE on a rainy day
He never saw her tears

She bade the last GOODBYE KISS to her WHOLE WORLD OF JOY

The storm parted their ways
He got himself a pretty looking wife


She was left alone, aloof, lonely, dejected, sad, depressed, derailed
Breathing yet dead inside
Her burning soul had no clue what to do next!

Her best friends supported her by lighting the died out flame inside her
She thought herself to be a loner
But in reality, her CREATOR- GOD was with her
She cried her heart out
Replaced her painful tears through night into her smiling face at day

Realized too much love, care and trust broke her heart
Braced herself up to face her emotional struggles and hardships
Determined to achieve something worthy for herself
She didn't fail but learned a lesson so tough
She smiled to ward off her sadness



And embraced herself on the mission to love herself and spread love across the dejected ones
Her smile and positive vibes won her many admirers
Her innocence and childishness won her the priceless friendships of small kids
She realized herself as a precious creation of the Almighty to spread her wings of joy, love, and happiness across the world

Fast Forward to Present Day:

She has beautiful eyes
People compliment her not knowing how much pain and suffering her eyes have endured
Along this journey, her soul re-energized and awakened to a precious wisdom knowing herself

She forgave her sinner and moved on with grace up until
He approached her 
Trying to grab her attention again on her journey by crossing in front of her vehicle 
Her response to Him, "Dude, I don't drink and drive or speed my car to lose control over it and leave the road or climb on people over the footpath!" :P :D




She's no longer the person
He once knew
For He was the one who left her alone to suffer the pain of a broken relationship

She learned her lesson the tough way 
Though initially, She could not see beyond the darkness,
But when She was guided by her friends and family
All She realized was Her problems left her alone
She was indeed left with many precious things- her happiness, soul, family, friends, freedom, dignity, self-confidence, respect and goal



She was left with whom she called her great friends with blossoming heart inside
They called her the winner of many ups and downs
And the ever devastating hurdles of life
They encouraged her saying 
She has the power within her to change the world
So she did a great job and made it possible
Like the morning sunshine, She shined bright after the dark night
Thus She lived happily ever after


© 2018 Anjali


Author's Note

Anjali
Thank you for reading!
I am an amateur writer, so expecting your honest reviews, advises and criticism.

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Wow, so nice dear. So engaging this write, I lked it very much. The flow of the story, past, present and then rewind and fast forward, really wonderful. Best line was he did not see her tear and not driving drinking.... That stanza. Awesome.... Keep writing... Xo

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Anjali

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for liking it!



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I love the way you tell this story without trying to do anything tricky . . . just a simple straightforward story that shows us the values you want to impart to your readers. We get the sense of time passing & life moving thru stages, your characters live & learn. I prefer this to the modern published books where a story jumps forward & backward & forward & backward for 300 pages. Just tell the damn story & don't show off by doing tricky timelines. This is what I love about your story. When you trust your material, when you trust that the story is compelling, a writer does not need to do tricky stuff to keep the reader interested. This is the deep-down beauty of a story like this. Well-chosen visuals, too! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Wow, so nice dear. So engaging this write, I lked it very much. The flow of the story, past, present and then rewind and fast forward, really wonderful. Best line was he did not see her tear and not driving drinking.... That stanza. Awesome.... Keep writing... Xo

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Anjali

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for liking it!
Excellent work with full of emotions. Really enjoyed it...

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Anjali

6 Years Ago

Thank you again for your appreciation.
Great visuals. Good emotional content. Your style is elaborate and expressive. I appreciate that.

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Anjali

6 Years Ago

Thank you Divya for your review- means a lot to me.
It was a beautiful read Anjali:)
A positive one and the pictures added a bit of magic to the entire read!
Great work dear!

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Anjali

6 Years Ago

Thank you Neetha :)
Zephyr

6 Years Ago

My pleasure
Can I say a word, wowwow....It's simply touched me, the message she raised after her struggle, That hitted me .....
everyone faces struggle and there are many who cheat us, but that's how we learn rite,....My friend I loved your write...:)

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Anjali

6 Years Ago

Thank you Surya for your review!
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A solid simply told story. I think this is a good one to leave alone as an example of that. If you wanted though you could dive a bit more into when you said "Suddenly". Much of the time stories like this are not a "One day Suddenly", type of thing, but are more complicated than that. There is probably a story in itself that could begin there. But if you're goal was to use hyperbole than that is different. Thanks for sharing.

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Anjali

7 Years Ago

Thank you Matt for you reviews :)
Beautiful narrative poetry like short story. A reader can appreciate the struggles of the protagonist and her pain n suffering as this is so true in life. Well written n draws the reader right to the end. Well done especially with the pics. Continue writing for you have potential and your grammar will get better n better.

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Anjali

7 Years Ago

Thank you for Chris for taking time to read the story :)
This was engaging and beautiful.......
a condensed biography of an extraordinary life, filled with the rainbow of emotions........ending on an important life lesson!
very well done.....
i really liked it!
:)

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Anjali

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pushkar for taking time to go through my story :)
Artwork gave life and journey to your poetry. I enjoyed the journey with you into love flames and into love burn away. I like the ending. We do learn one day. Love is just a part of life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and welcome. You are a talented writer.
Coyote

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Anjali

7 Years Ago

You really made my day Coyote... Thank you for stopping by to read my story and enjoying the journey.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I loved your work and you are welcome.

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