A Love Story Gone Wrong

A Love Story Gone Wrong

A Story by Anjali

This is an attempt to express the short fling between two people of opposite sex.

How can I not love you, young lady?
You have the fragrance of a flower
A cute, innocent face with those rosy smile
Your elegance caught my heart, mind, and soul

The lady replies I'm not flattered by your love proposal
I have my own dreams to fulfill
And need not divert my attention to love
Your love seem a pretense
And I have no time for it young man
So you better find another lady

Not knowing whether it hurt him or was it an attack to his ego
He fled away to a place unknown
Thus, gone a love story wrong!

© 2018 Anjali

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Sometimes. No time for love. Love need time and effort. I liked your honest thoughts and the honest answer. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love that went north. And you went south.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's okay. Not really deep or says anything new.

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Added on May 22, 2017
Last Updated on April 10, 2018
Tags: love story, love story gone wrong, love you, love, proposal, love proposal




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