Daisies

Daisies

A Poem by Mithridate
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Ha, yeah if you notice in the poem, i wrote the word tazing. it's the only thing that rhymed at the moment. stupid title, yeah. apologizing if it sucks, thanks if you like it :)

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A lovely daisy, a beautiful rose.

You make me feel good from my head to my toes.

Your words are filled with so much love.

Kindness so free just like a dove.

Your presence is amazing, and your love is so tazing.

Your soul is so fine, I just wish that you were mine.

© 2010 Mithridate


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Short and sweet :D
I liked it.... I loved how the message was clear, yet not obvious :D
Niice :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


So sweet, like always. I love the word tazing. Awsome choice.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on June 20, 2010
Tags: love, real, feelings

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Mithridate
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Just another another teenager with insomnia, just another teenager in love with someone who's in love with someone else, another teenager who is still looking for a place in this world to belong, the .. more..

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