Dreams

yep, title fail: check. failing poem: check. The word tazing....:check :) the apology for sucking: check. the thanking if you like it: check :)

In the night you hear some dreams.

They are ripped from the seams.

From a distance, you hear a noise.

You listen closely, it's someones voice.

His voice is sweet, and so amazing.

The sound you hear is so tazing.

What he said, you had no clue.

He had said, "I Love You".

You didn't know who he was talking to.

He was talking to only you.

Reviews

[Mitch*Dandy]

Bravo! Love this poem... I like the ending when it says;
"What he said, you had no clue.

He had said, "I Love You".

You didn't know who he was talking to.

He was talking to only you."

[Aggie Skeleton]

Wow, deep. I love how it adresses the reader. A nine on the Hysteria scale.