Us not together

Us not together

A Poem by Mithridate

si :( oh, and sorry it's kinda off topic in the middle...but it was real


Deep in sadness, there I lie.

When I see you two together, I want to cry.

Her love for you is such a token.

When I watch you, my heart gets broken.

When she was asleep that very night,

 I saw you, and my heart grew light.

So hard you were trying

 to keep yourself from crying.

You told me your problems, I listened to you.

There was something I wanted to do.

When you had fallen asleep, I watched you breath.

I had to do something I never wanted to do.....I had to leave.

I want to feel your warm embrace.

I want you to kiss my face.

© 2010 Mithridate

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I like it the passion i can feel it in each word that was written down. In all it was great

Posted 12 Years Ago

So sad, yet you're such a happy person. Horatio Cane!!!!! Ha, ha, loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nicely sad and sweet. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Really sad and heart-wrenching poem. You expressed your emotions to the fullest, and threw in a good rhyme scheme that flowed nicely. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks. :]

Posted 12 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on May 19, 2010
Tags: sadness, feelings, real




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