Dark Waters

Dark Waters

A Poem by Mithridate
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this was kinda about the oil spill that has happened...but yet another crappy poem....

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Darkness slides over the water.

This was not intended slaughter.

Swallowing all who come near,

 as they swim an ocean of fear.

The darkness ends all of their lives.

From this disaster, who survives?

Tears are flooding from their eyes.

Can you hear their upset cries?

Can Poseiden feel their pain?

The tears shall down like rain.

Will this start an angry war?

These are the cries you can't ignore.

© 2010 Mithridate


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I loves it, and stop saying they're crappy. Cause they ain't.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is not crappy at all, it's great not once have i read a poem about this problem that has happened, it's great and wow awesome

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 9, 2010
Last Updated on July 9, 2010
Tags: disaster, feelings, animals, nature, oil spill

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Mithridate
Mithridate

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