Priorities

Priorities

A Poem by Miss Anna
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This is one for my friends who were always proud of who they were and never hid behind the ideas that society has for young people. There's no greater gift than the truth that we're all beautiful.

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Breathe in your light

Breathe out my concentration

One look at that smile

Give in to the liberation

 

We are all born free

Some choose to stay, most choose to be

Someone else, part of a machine

But you, you set me free

 

Hear you play guitar

Block out the negativity

Feeling so safe

Everything becomes relativity

 

We are all born free

Some choose to stay, but most are forced to be

Someone else, part of a machine

But you, you set me free again

And you,

You are my best friend

© 2011 Miss Anna


Author's Note

Miss Anna
http://www.guardian.co.uk/lifeandstyle/2010/oct/14/hate-hipsters-blogs

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i like the positiveness and sweetness of this. the second stanza reads slightly awkwardly because of it's DDED scheme, but other than that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love that this is a positive poem, its hard to find them! i have trouble myself writing anything positive in poetry so i found this is really special. awesome work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. Very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Miss Anna
Miss Anna

Wichita, KS



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I want to take this world and dust it off. Take the corruption and tears and sorrow and give it all a little shake. Make the world fresh, make it what it was. more..

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A Poem by Miss Anna