Heart of the earth

Heart of the earth

A Poem by Savanna
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A little thought on pollution and such

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In the crevice of the earth 
the universal heart beats
a billion people trample the dirt
the heart grows louder with every birth
the thunder in the sky represents its hurt
the timid heart swells and with anger 
of the polluted earth
The ice melts the city's fall
the decay of acid rich on every terrain. 
Mother natural has her turn drowning out all the sins.

© 2014 Savanna


Author's Note

Savanna
please excuse grammar, also Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

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Starts off rhyming, then stops near the end, was that intentional? or was that just the way it panned out? Nice though, i do like this, very good visuals

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savanna

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Thats just the way it panned out. lol
I absolutely love those verses,  very relateable! amazingly written and well expressed. 

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savanna

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :D
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome

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Hi, my name is Savanna. I love reading and writing I want to be in Art or maybe a writer not sure yet so i decided to join this website :) more..

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