LOST IN THE DUNES

LOST IN THE DUNES

A Poem by Annie S
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painting a picture

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Created by the wind, the mystery of silenced dust.

Standing alone with the accompaniment of the flaming sun

Has nowhere to go or nowhere to hide its nakedness.

The obstacle is now covered with sand, drowning into thin air.

Screams of help cannot be recognised.

As it slowly sank to the edge of darkness,

The sun sets with satisfaction.

 

The disappearance cannot be overlooked,

But cast a shadow of liveliness.

It waits for being rescued to see the earth again,

While the sand moves to a different direction.

For now it is lost, innocence of nature will abide.

© 2013 Annie S


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Nice write, I did imagine some views of this short write... in my mind. A clear pic. you shown us of 'LOST IN DUNES' through making this piece. I liked this shorty poem. Words're powerful much and each one's strongly penned. Keep writing. Great job once again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment
I appreciate that
Inspiring Writer

8 Years Ago

Your welcome and Thank you for making such a poem
I appreciate that ;)
Annie S

8 Years Ago

well glad you like it.



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the only thing permanent is change, nice poem on the change clearly seen in deserts, the sand dunes changing shapes.

best wishes

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Amazing description in the poem. Nature allowed us to see and know the beauty and power of nature. Dunes show us. All things can change. Few things last forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment
Glad you liked it :)
Cryptic, but occasionally beautiful. I found it enjoyable. You seem creative; I think you would benefit from expanding your vocabulary so as to express the more nuanced machinations of your mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

yes i agree expanding my vocabulary is is what i'm trying to do thank you :)
Nice poem about the ever shifting sands, just wondering what it was covering up and will it ever be seen again? Or is that one the reader must guess or leave to their own imagination?

Nice curious poem, well put together !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

I have a very specific idea of it and it will be seen again unless the sand moves a different direct.. read more
Nice write, I did imagine some views of this short write... in my mind. A clear pic. you shown us of 'LOST IN DUNES' through making this piece. I liked this shorty poem. Words're powerful much and each one's strongly penned. Keep writing. Great job once again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment
I appreciate that
Inspiring Writer

8 Years Ago

Your welcome and Thank you for making such a poem
I appreciate that ;)
Annie S

8 Years Ago

well glad you like it.

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Added on August 13, 2013
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Tags: mystery, life, desert, dunes, sand, sun, earth, silence, alone, nature

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Annie S
Annie S

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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