MIRABELLA

MIRABELLA

A Poem by Annie S
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An emergency...

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Authentic white blooms flourishing to see the world.

Sipping coffee as I see its revolution,

From a secure stem to a seed so empty and tedious.

It has been cloaked, by its creamy petals,

So responsive and different to the flower, ‘New Love’

The illumination of its colour gives reflection to my coffee

Its smell gives an outburst of a trivial scent like a baby’s breath.



 

I watched as the rain gently dribbles down unto its petals.

As the crisp wind gorged through the branches,

Petals struck down like snow disguised unto my dress.

The feeling of passion wanting to be close.

Smiling blissfully as I touch its delicate petals that were twisted.

Thrills of being intact into my shielded hands,

Never being lost or afraid, but amicable as I carried it away.

© 2013 Annie S


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Hi Annie!
Wow..I remember the first time you published and asked for reviews and you were a little hesitant thinking you were below par..
But if we were to commend anyone for such poetic growth,it definately is you!!
I like your articulation in this piece,it gives me the eagerness to see this beautiful sight(that apparently isnt in Africa)
nice writing,hats off !


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Ever since i came here i thought i was writing terribly, but i completely forgot this account that m.. read more



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You have a beautiful sense of description..well put in a simple and understandable language..that is what poetry is all about...to be understood.Beautiful piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Hi Annie!
Wow..I remember the first time you published and asked for reviews and you were a little hesitant thinking you were below par..
But if we were to commend anyone for such poetic growth,it definately is you!!
I like your articulation in this piece,it gives me the eagerness to see this beautiful sight(that apparently isnt in Africa)
nice writing,hats off !


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Ever since i came here i thought i was writing terribly, but i completely forgot this account that m.. read more
hey good job I wish I was that good :(

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Am sure you are much better than me :) and thank you
Chandler bing

7 Years Ago

naah you are just being modest now.
Annie S

7 Years Ago

lol no i just have faith in people
Very sweet poem.
Adore its beauty.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment

zainul

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)
What a splendid affinity you have created with this beautiful flowering plant !

Wonderful creative writing and imagery, poetry perfection I say !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

7 Years Ago

Thank you Tom. Your comment wants me to write again

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Added on August 24, 2013
Last Updated on August 27, 2013
Tags: mirabella, flower, fear, seed, poetry, lost, happiness, world, peace, love, magic

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Annie S
Annie S

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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