I LOVED YOU...

I LOVED YOU...

A Poem by Annie S
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It finally came to an end.

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I loved you. And hate to say, but i still do.
I've always wondered if you ever did cause' you didn't give me a clue.
I was innocent by the way you treat me,
 You locked me into your heart and threw away the key.
How could you be so cruel?.. 
Chose the rock and took no notice of the jewel.
Tell me something? Did you ever cared?
Or did you left me hanging in the air?

I thought you were the one, You never were around.
I needed you my love.
Second chances i gave. Something that you fired away.
You didn't see me clearly at all, just a portrait on my wall.
Why did you do this?..
Chose fame and took no heed of a gift.
I'll say something.. paddle your own canoe
 Because I loved you...

               

© 2013 Annie S


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If you didn't actually experience this, then I appreciate your ability to objectively write. That's how I write, I write as if I'm actually feeling what the character's feeling when I'm not. Even if this was subjective work, all in all, it was a great poem. Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Iflybyyou

4 Years Ago

No problem :) keep writing. Follow your dreams, and remember that your potential is in what you feel.. read more
Annie S

4 Years Ago

I'll keep that advice because you see that's what i need to hear. who knows your same words will be .. read more
Iflybyyou

4 Years Ago

Thanks :) lol tbh, those words came to me in a dream after I asked God about his will. I didn't know.. read more



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Love is blind. It is one of the deepest emotions I believe. Writing this, whether from the heart or not, takes a lot of emotion and understanding of that emotion. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

4 Years Ago

Appreciate your feedback, Glad you enjoy it :)
If you didn't actually experience this, then I appreciate your ability to objectively write. That's how I write, I write as if I'm actually feeling what the character's feeling when I'm not. Even if this was subjective work, all in all, it was a great poem. Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Iflybyyou

4 Years Ago

No problem :) keep writing. Follow your dreams, and remember that your potential is in what you feel.. read more
Annie S

4 Years Ago

I'll keep that advice because you see that's what i need to hear. who knows your same words will be .. read more
Iflybyyou

4 Years Ago

Thanks :) lol tbh, those words came to me in a dream after I asked God about his will. I didn't know.. read more
This is a very nice poem. This really fits into my life right now with a certain guy in my high schools' Drumline. It makes me think of the feeling of realizing that the person you like doesn't like you back.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Glad that you can relate on this and thank you so much for your comment I appreciate that :)
i also start loving you

Posted 8 Years Ago


When i saw you write 'l i love you'' i thought you were refering to me lol, sharply i pump in to reply, .. Nice poem friend and noble poet

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your comment :)
I admire your art flow, and the words are very powerful. Each cry-out is unique and doesn't repeat . The work around "loved" is very nice, sort of, from past to future. "no longer you are in my heart".

Thank you for the good read and definitely keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for commenting i really appreciate that :)
Very well potrayed. I can just feel the emotion, the pain, the love. You are strong and I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

8 Years Ago

When love gives you pain make lemonade and share it again.. thank you for your comment :)

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Added on August 26, 2013
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Tags: Love, fantasy, poetry, romance, alone, survival, heart, blood, anger

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Annie S
Annie S

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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