Come to me

Come to me

A Poem by Inkcognito
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"just follow the road..."

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If I were to call out
from the edge of the
glowing horizon at sunset
would you follow your heart
leave your treasures behind
and come to me?

 

If I were to whisper our
words on the bristling breeze
from the center
of my shrouded shelter
would you follow my scent
would you come to me?

 

If I were to breathe
your name into the misty
morning air from my
distant smoky sanctuary
would you walk the road to heaven
would you come to me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 Inkcognito


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I love the last stanza most of all. This is a very profound piece of writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a touching and romantic piece! I love it. It creates the atmosphere in its earnestness. Very nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is just awesome writing - everything I love in a poem and more. And the picture is a great compliment to the words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. I loved this poem. I can relate so much to the meaning and your language was so descriptive. It is such a beautiful poem...and somehow kinda sad. I am going to house it in my library. Great poem!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Such a calm, relaxing, and smooth poem! Very well written! ---Enjoyed this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


You used your vocabulary like paint for an artist! You did a very good job! I like the peice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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oh these words..beautiful honey coated words..this has a whimizcal charming feel to it..

Posted 8 Years Ago


who ever he is , I will Urge you to Run to you .... beautiful poem , so much longing and hope :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Come to Me, all who are weary and heavy-laden, and I will give you rest.

Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and YOU WILL FIND REST FOR YOUR SOULS.

For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.


Posted 8 Years Ago


such a beautiful beckoning .

an amazing graphic you have chosen .

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 11, 2010
Last Updated on February 23, 2011
Tags: come, road, sunset, heaven

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Inkcognito
Inkcognito

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I am no master of poetry nor an accomplished writer, simply a dreamer stringing together some words. I hope that you will enjoy the read. Your reviews and feedback will be much appreciated -thank .. more..

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