Come to me

Come to me

A Poem by Inkcognito

"just follow the road..."


If I were to call out
from the edge of the
glowing horizon at sunset
would you follow your heart
leave your treasures behind
and come to me?


If I were to whisper our
words on the bristling breeze
from the center
of my shrouded shelter
would you follow my scent
would you come to me?


If I were to breathe
your name into the misty
morning air from my
distant smoky sanctuary
would you walk the road to heaven
would you come to me?

























© 2011 Inkcognito

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I love the last stanza most of all. This is a very profound piece of writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Such a touching and romantic piece! I love it. It creates the atmosphere in its earnestness. Very nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is just awesome writing - everything I love in a poem and more. And the picture is a great compliment to the words.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow. I loved this poem. I can relate so much to the meaning and your language was so descriptive. It is such a beautiful poem...and somehow kinda sad. I am going to house it in my library. Great poem!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Such a calm, relaxing, and smooth poem! Very well written! ---Enjoyed this!

Posted 9 Years Ago

You used your vocabulary like paint for an artist! You did a very good job! I like the peice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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oh these words..beautiful honey coated words..this has a whimizcal charming feel to it..

Posted 9 Years Ago

who ever he is , I will Urge you to Run to you .... beautiful poem , so much longing and hope :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Come to Me, all who are weary and heavy-laden, and I will give you rest.

Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and YOU WILL FIND REST FOR YOUR SOULS.

For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.

Posted 9 Years Ago

such a beautiful beckoning .

an amazing graphic you have chosen .

Posted 9 Years Ago

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12 Reviews
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on December 11, 2010
Last Updated on February 23, 2011
Tags: come, road, sunset, heaven



I am no master of poetry nor an accomplished writer, simply a dreamer stringing together some words. I hope that you will enjoy the read. Your reviews and feedback will be much appreciated -thank .. more..


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