I Wait

I Wait

A Poem by Annie29

I can't breathe,

untill I see the day.

I can't sleep.

I'll never be okay.

Just three words,

I want you to say.

Lonely in this bed,

I lay.

Somewhere, Somehow,

I'll find a way.

I won't stop,

untill we're wed.

I won't leave,

untill I'm dead.

© 2010 Annie29


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Very passionate :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yeah the end was a little scratchy, but I liked it! :) Good job. And it was short too. I enjoy shorter poems, because they're quick and usually (if you're a good poet) to the point!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Last line was hard. But rest of poem was hopeful and full of love and desire. I agree with you. When the love is good. We best hold on tight and be thankful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very lyrical really. Wonderful rhyme scheme and flow.
I like the emotion in this. This is very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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