A Poem by Annie29

Really Short, but great.


A women came from a man's ribs.

Not from his feet to be stomped on.

But from his side,

to be equal.

Under his arm,

to be protected.

And by his heart,

to be loved.

© 2010 Annie29

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yes. very good. kind of a magic little poem. b ut i like the other two of yours i ve read so far better

Posted 9 Years Ago

you said it and i think it is a great short little poem that shows equality between man and woman.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 10 Years Ago

no it's suppose to be MAN
I apologize (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is a beautiful, short poem. I personally cannot seem to convey so much meaning in so little time. Very well done! There are a couple little errors in the first line, but if those are intentional ignore me.

Posted 10 Years Ago

The words were true and the story was very good. Woman should be treated with respect. Without woman we would not be here to show we are graceful for them. A outstanding poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 23, 2010
Last Updated on April 25, 2010




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