Women

Women

A Poem by Annie29
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Really Short, but great.

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A women came from a man's ribs.

Not from his feet to be stomped on.

But from his side,

to be equal.

Under his arm,

to be protected.

And by his heart,

to be loved.

© 2010 Annie29


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yes. very good. kind of a magic little poem. b ut i like the other two of yours i ve read so far better


Posted 9 Years Ago


you said it and i think it is a great short little poem that shows equality between man and woman.

Posted 9 Years Ago


amen

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh,
no it's suppose to be MAN
I apologize (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautiful, short poem. I personally cannot seem to convey so much meaning in so little time. Very well done! There are a couple little errors in the first line, but if those are intentional ignore me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The words were true and the story was very good. Woman should be treated with respect. Without woman we would not be here to show we are graceful for them. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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