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A Poem by Annie29

Most kids see failure.

I see achievement.

I never failed,

except at achieveing.

That's what I was doing.

Achieveing.

Riding the world.

Like taking out the trash.

I didn't deserve this.

I deserve a silver metal,

along with a silver bullet.

© 2013 Annie29


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nice poem..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice. Very short and simple, but all and all you should always strive for achievement! And even if you dont think you deserve things that happen in your life, it happened for a reason, and although everyone deserves that silver bullet, some deserve it in nicer ways then others. ;) Keep on writing tho!

Posted 9 Years Ago


great poem. i lik e t he contradiction of failure and achievement. and how the same thing can be viewed in opposite ways. i like the opposites throughout the poem . my favorite : riding the world. like taking ou t the trash.
you deserve a gold metal. though silver medals are great too

Posted 9 Years Ago



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