Bachpan udhaar dekar

Dedicated to life and childhood

Ae zindagi zara narmi se pesh aao humse
Bade hue hai hum, tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar


Tere raste me anhad daudte, ghis chuke hai joote
Konse woh khilaune tere the, jo shararat me humse toote

Kabhi toh rakh aib ko jeb me apni aur salaam kar hume
Bade hue hai hum, tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar

Jo kaagaz se utaarte the, barish ke pani me kashti apni
Aaj tere mele me chale hai, banane hasti apni

Ae zindagi reham kar, ye log mehnat din raat karte hai
Aa baith ped ki chaav tale, bachpan ko yaad karte hai

Tujhe kuch toh ho ilm ki kya khoya hai humne
Bade hue hai hum, tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar

Ab bas yaade reh gayi hai, inhe sath rehne do
Baadal chahe le jao, barsaat rehne do

Door kardo dosto ko, hatho me hath rehne do
Chaand ko chaho chupa lo tum,bas raat rehne do

Kuch lamhe toh ata karo khushiyo ke hume
Bade hue hai hum, tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar

Woh toota hua taara kaha le jata hai khwaisho ko humari,
Woh palke aakhir jaati kaha hai,
Socha tha bade honge toh malum padega,
Par ye kambhakht zindagi hume batati kaha hai

Bas itna ehsaan karde in sawaalo ka jawaab dekar hume
Bade hue hai hum, tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar

Author's Note

While sharing memories of childhood with one of my friend. I just came up with few lines.
It's a hindi writing.
Thank you all in advance for review.

Reviews

[Manisha]

I absolutely L O V E this write! So beautifully created with imagination....
GREAT JOB....

[Happy hours]

thank you very much for the valuable review... :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Kuch toh ahsan kar...re zindagi...
aise hi kuch Maine likha tha... but unfortunately, Maine uss piece ko kho diya...
yeh kavita bohot hi achi hain..
ek kavita zindagi ke naam......
wah!!

[Happy hours]

bahut dhanyawaad apka... thank you very much for the appreciation... :)

[Rimjhim]

Every single line just takes me back to another world...

[Happy hours]

M glad that u liked it...thanks for the review... :)

[gunjan]

zindagi se aapki shikayat behkhoob dikhi hai,
aapke rooh ki sachayi is kavita mei chhipi hai,
aap kon ho ye toh hum nahi jante,
par aapke tarif ki lehre iss kavita mei likhi hai......
good work....
thanks for sharing...

[Happy hours]

thanks a lot gunjan for such beautiful review. You made my day... :) :)

[gunjan]

your welcome!!!!!!

[Anamika:-Search for a n..]

awesome lines...
give so much to remember n feel again

[Happy hours]

thank you so much anamika... :)

[Riti Rajput]

Kya khoob likha hai tuumne... apni yaado ka tevar..
Bade hue hai hum b... bachpan udhaar dekar...

What a lovely poem... very nicely written.. aur hindi me hai to aur b khoobsoorat lag rhi hai..
Do share your poems.. :)

[Happy hours]

thanks a lot for your kind words... :)

[hania azhar]

I love this poem. Childhood memories always bring smiles to our faces. :)

[Happy hours]

Hey thanks for the review. yes that's true.. :)

[hania azhar]

you're welcome :)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

"Bade hue hain hum tujhe bachpan udhaar dekar"
Kya khoob likha hai janaab. Iss kavita mein aapne waqt ke khel ko bakhoobi pesh kara hai. Isse padhkar mujhe Jagjit Singh ki ghazal "Woh kaagaz ki qashti" yaad aa gyi.
Bahut khoob. Likhte rahen.

[Happy hours]

bahut bahut shukriya apka..

[Shabeeh Haider]

A beautiful nazm. Childhood memories often strike hard and bring smiles and tears as well. Love the line: " bade huai hain hum, bachpan udhar dekar"

[Happy hours]

thanks shabeeh for your kind words... :)