The Sky

The sky above us

The sky is always changing -
Can't it settle down?
Shades of blue, then reddy hue;
Puffs of grey and white -
And then it's bloody night!
At least I see a smattering
Of twinkly little things;
A silver globe occasionally -
Which admittedly it brings
A sort of pleasant feeling,
Warming to the soul,
But overall it's so annoying -
Irritatingly droll!

Reviews

[Gandré]

this made my day, such a joyful poem!

[GioVonnie]

I like the flow this poem has...nice job good imagination by the way

[Sarah]

Love it! What a unique look at the many faces of the sky...usually the sky is portrayed to be very beautiful or mysterious in poetry and yet you take an entirely different approach. Very creative - I really enjoyed reading this!

[rockinmiley555]

lots of imagery here. i think its good, but not your best.

[Neeeks!]

This is a nice poem. I like the description and flow of words. Nicely done.

~Neeeks ♥

[Abhinav]

Okay, this is pretty good
nice job::
your first review!