Death look at me in the face

Death look at me in the face

A Poem by Ian
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Its to not fear whats going on in life

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 Im am a fearless kid that will not fear death 

i am ready to take my last breath 

kill me dead for i am ready to see the promise land 

its ok if you do feel the same or just cant understand 

i am ready to see the real light that shine 

because paradise will finally be mine 

i will leave everything behind me and go on home 

go up to heaven so i wint feel alone

now devil or so called death you havent tried to stop me 

i am a dangerous threat bit you didnt stop me yet

so i say again i fear no evil or death

as long i have god and jesus

so i will take my last breath  

© 2010 Ian


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Powerful and very well said.
Another excellent poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nothing scares me...Death comes to us all.. that's life
But we must ((((( never provoke death )))))... life is to short
No one is ready to end life.. to young to died
One thing.. huge mistake..
We do not know when we pass..how will be judge!
We must do the right thing in life..to want to died
The devil.. is not a good friend.. to carried along
But the angel of death is so good.. our best friend..
so I say again... fear is not of God..
Death comes to us all..
and Jesus is my friend..amen
well done .. Good Job kido

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really brave, powerful and confident. Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow the concept was deep and creative bro. you flow flawlessly on point in this piece. keep that pen hot...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Death will come quick enough. In my time of living. Death was in reach. I try to keep him behind me. The lord will welcome us when our time is to leave this old world. A powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome!!!!!!! this one is so refreshing.... when i read the title i thought you might have written some dark experience... but this one was different.... i liked it.. hmmm... it's good you are not afraid of death... challenging death!!!!....

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ian

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