This chaotic, idiotic, culturally patriotic mind manipulation makes me more than memorable to my...

This chaotic, idiotic, culturally patriotic mind manipulation makes me more than memorable to my...

A Poem by Anti Phalanx
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*mental despotic dispute, deranging dangerously done dragging downwards. *rest of the title

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I'm stranded and stressed,
No hope, I'm depressed.
With weights on my feet,
Can't find where ends meet.

Like a stiff broken zipper,
Or a seal with one flipper.
I'm a clock with no hands,
No future, no plans.

Empathy; Jiffy.
Mental state's a bit iffy.
Psychotic robotics,
Trapped in erotic hypnotics.

These rotten optic sights,
In begotten lethargy lights.
Maybe it's this height,
But it doesn't feel right.

© 2015 Anti Phalanx


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I feel like this a lot sometimes. That I feel stuck and have no idea of what I want to do. I have no plans for the future while everyone around seems to have theirs all figured out. I don't what I want to do with my life...just want people to be happy for me in whatever I choose to do. I really admired this...very powerful! And just to add: "hight" should be spelled "height".

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Anti Phalanx

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback! It's always somewhat reassuring - sadly - to know that others can feel the .. read more
I Am Svetlana

6 Years Ago

I don't proofread sometimes either. Haha. I feel it's good enough once I get it on paper. I always p.. read more



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I feel like this a lot sometimes. That I feel stuck and have no idea of what I want to do. I have no plans for the future while everyone around seems to have theirs all figured out. I don't what I want to do with my life...just want people to be happy for me in whatever I choose to do. I really admired this...very powerful! And just to add: "hight" should be spelled "height".

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Anti Phalanx

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback! It's always somewhat reassuring - sadly - to know that others can feel the .. read more
I Am Svetlana

6 Years Ago

I don't proofread sometimes either. Haha. I feel it's good enough once I get it on paper. I always p.. read more

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Added on March 20, 2015
Last Updated on May 9, 2015
Tags: Apathy, hats maybe, depression, choices, lethargy, decisions, stuck, stress

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Anti Phalanx
Anti Phalanx

Solihull, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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Professional Hobbyist. I live in a box. It is my box. I like my box. I like to peak out of it once in a while & feel glad about not peaking out of it so often. It's a rather nice box. more..

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