Unwanted Endure!

Love to blaim myself! :)

I hate it when i wont be
enough of people need,
am really just a unwanted
burden for other,indeed!
I hate it when what i want to
explain,no sure,
for everyone i'm pain they
endure!
I hate it when i could'nt be
of people expectation,
i'm only the reason for there
unwanted frustration!
Now i'm just crying like a
weeping willow
that always make me to lay in
my pillow!
For making others smile,my
eyes goes wet,
but thn also to me everyone
hates!
#Riaan

Author's Note

Is this good?

Reviews

[Jenny]

good is relative. and to say that this is just good does not do it justice. this poem makes me think and it flows well (in some places not as well as others). but i really enjoyed this.

thank you so much for sharing!
you have such a wonderful talent