Answer in Passion

Answer in Passion

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

inspired by my muse

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Kiss uncontrollably

 

Before today melts into yesterday

And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows

 

Feel  brazenly

 

When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind

 

Love unconditionally

 

With pure intention...

And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly

 

Travel deep within me

 

Through Darkness you shall discover

A glistening Light

 

Hold close...

 

Gently...

 

Without spoken promise

Therein lies magic in the eyes...

 

Take...

 

Bravely give more...

 

Lover to Lover...

 

Flesh within Flesh...

 

Until our embers Seduce Eternity

 

© 2008 TamiViolet


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I feel I need to break this down as I read, to respond to each stanza, it is that good and I feel the need to interpret in how I think it reads.

Kiss uncontrollably
Before today melts into yesterday
And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows
This says to me that we should love with wild abandon, out of control, lick and suck each other dry, he who hesitates is lost and those thoughts become just that......thoughts lost in the abyss of dreams, never to become fruitful.


Feel brazenly
When Fire defines the Answer
And Heat over - rules the Mind
Be gallant in your convictions, when you know it is the desire and seduction that fuels your fire, don't allow your mind to think it may be something else, admit what it is.
Love unconditionally
With pure intention...
And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly
Nothing else nor no one else should matter at this time, a time when she will show you all you need to know and feel.
Travel deep within me
Through Darkness you shall discover
A glistening Light
Hold close...
Look deep within her heart, there are answers there for you
be humble, give in to her. Your reward awaits, it is her promise... not to be taken lightly.

Gently...
Without spoken promise
Therein lies magic in the eyes...
Take...
Bravely give more...
Lover to Lover...
Flesh within Flesh...
Until our embers Seduce Eternity
There are no need for words of promise, but rather a look into one anothers eyes, knowing what you give will be given in return, everything I do for you, I do for myself, for our passion will be forever, for each other.

Just my interpretation and you are such a provoker of thought.
Tony




















Posted 12 Years Ago


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The colors and the font that you used make this very powerful. It was a great poem.

xxoxx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my candle burns at both ends
it will not last the night
but ah, my foes, and oh my friends
it gives a lovely light :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really adore the fire spoken in the lines . . . the shorter lines . . . it's all pretty breathless and so passionate

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked especially the blend of spirit and flesh, for example the 'travel deep within me', which spoke of penetration of body and soul. The time framing was cleverly done too... The need to make love before time takes over and then the final afterglow that achieves immortality. Each word spoke of a tender, determined and delightful invitation.... Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i liked this piece alot... the passion flows through your words very well... overall i thought this was a very romantic and superb write... like the pic alot too...nice job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautifully tender, deeply passionate, and profoundly eternal... Love lifts on wings in each letter and phrase. So well done on several levels!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even the layout of the piece was sensual. Another great piece. I like the titles then the descriptions. Very creative. Love and lust never sounded so good. I might be looking for a lunch time snack.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title...awesome! The picture....makes me sweat. I love this. You have a way with enticing and tormenting (in a good way) the reader with your sensuous imagery.

"When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind"

~ That is commanding, tantalizing. Wonderful job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice wording, Apollonia. It feels like you have captured the intimacy of some very special moments.

"And heat over - rules the Mind". This line seems to be expressing how the intensity of passion can take over the mind, perhaps.

The words in red seem like the woman is telling her lover what she wants. Or maybe what she expects from this experience?

The lines, "Kiss uncontrollably" and "Feel brazenly" are nice too. They seem to express how passion can make you feel almost out of control, sometimes. A great poem. Thanks for sharing with us, Apollonia!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apollonia....i enjoyed this piece more...and i hate to say it...but as 2 seperate pieces.....i wonder if its because of the color style you used and as i read through it its how my eyes kept decideing to read it....now that did nothing for my excitment of the piece just an observation....great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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