Black Meets Black

Black Meets Black

A Poem by TamiViolet

 

It is said that opposites attract...

I don't know about that...

We're two silver dragons...

 

Dressing in purple and

Bathing in oils that compel,

Truth disclosed beneath

A waxing moon...

 

The clouds hid the stars...

 

Two Rowan trees

Understand their destination.

I'll feed you the orange berries...

Is a soul full of hate really...

 

More

Powerful?

 

Tell me.

 

There are many initiations in this
 Life............

 

No one else can do it.  What will

You do now?  Without me...?

 

Think carefully before you answer...

 

 

 

 

© 2009 TamiViolet


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No one else can do it. What will
You do now? Without me...?

Think carefully before you answer...

there is no one without the other...and even though opposites attract, sometimes it can be a match made in hell.

a exceptional piece of work, nonetheless, my dear...thanks for sharing.

A xox

Posted 15 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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I've missed your writing, A?

As usual, you make your point quickly and powerfully. You express pain, curiosity and the need to know all so well in this piece.

Sometimes opposite means just that.

Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

It is said that opposites attract...

I don't know about that...



I don't know about that either~I think maybe not in the long run
I would think having more in common makes for a better match/relationship

great Write my friend~Fran




Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A very interesting write. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

No one else can do it. What will
You do now? Without me...?

Think carefully before you answer...

I like these lines here, makes you think if you should stay
or if you should walk awa, i think anything can be worked through though
thats just y oppion though.

well said write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

No one else can do it. What will
You do now? Without me...?

Think carefully before you answer...

there is no one without the other...and even though opposites attract, sometimes it can be a match made in hell.

a exceptional piece of work, nonetheless, my dear...thanks for sharing.

A xox

Posted 15 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Let me get back to you on that. :)


I like it. Intertwined but why? I like the pic you chose also. Kudos.

Posted 15 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

How great to see something new come from you, i knew in time something brilliant will arise... wading through the emotions when a relationship is in a rough patch and you have to decide if it is worth carrying on...

Two Rowan trees
Understand their destination.
I'll feed you the orange berries...
Is a soul full of hate really...

just love that stanza... but the whole thing really is hare core and powerful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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