Permutation

just a few random thoughts

 

 

In my solitude,

Will you weave between

Fissures of grey matter

Like a caterpillar

 

In her chrysalis,

And transform moments

Washed away from stinging silvery

Rain that never cleansed...

 

Memories of you...

 

Metamorphosis is gradual...

'Be patient, Darling!'

For my love travels as the speed

Of light although I might appear...

 

Dissimilar...

 

Will you recognize me in an

Altered form?

Ever wonder who's inside?

Sacred truths scroll passion...

 

Edge within the soul...

 

What if our destiny isn't predetermined,

But written ourselves everyday...

 

Every moment...

 

The question becomes...

What will be written next, for we come
Not with catechismal

Instruction...

 

We are but totems of the heart's

Truth

 

Follow me through the dark
Tunnel of initiation

Our private place

To be reborn into a new life...

 

Without ever gazing back.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Stunningly beautiful and gracefully dreamy, the melting into one effect is highly eloquent,
this is magical and brilliant surrender as your whsipers flow across the readers heart like a warm breeze,
I love the depth and the transporting feeling, ethereal and consuming, magnificent metaphor.. Wow

[Ralphy]

I like the serenity of the coming of spring, the whisking thoughts that challenge every aspect of the past and now deliverers to the future with no a regret. The passives of nature to collect two souls of a random nature and bring them together in compassion, bond and flower is such a beautiful concept. Without a doubt you captured all those elements in heighten awareness of love. Beautifully done.

[These Haunted Hallways]

WoW! Talk about beauty and passion in this write! I agree with Michael, too. It does have an ethereal feeling to it, as like a ghost whispering into the person's ear, telling them their most hidden secrets. Beautiful imagery, and a very majestic picture as well :) Great piece!

B.A.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow i don't know where to begin here... you delve so eloquently into fate verses free will and how love can take two people on different coarse but bring them back together, you mesmerize me with your mystical style and intelligent thinking... really an astounding write.