Gifts of Magic

Senryu

 

 

 

 

Frolic in the field

Ride the ebony horses

Unveil what is real

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh!!! :O :O
What a beautiful 5-7-5!
I didn't even realized it was a Haiku before reading the description..
Your words are so vivid and deep. It's surely very hard to deliver so much mature sense and depth in words when one needs to write in restricted syllabus counts.
Beautiful! simply beautiful piece!
I will surely add it to my favorites!

[Wicahpi]

A joyous Haiku about one of my favorite of God's creatures; the horse.
The image is fantastic!

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Simply elegant and wise with deep emotion~

[Clockwork]

I think that you executed the senryu form well. Reading this poem is like standing on the two sides of that field deciding what is real. Well done.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

amazing what can be said with 12 little words... you are good at senryus .. this makes me think of freedom and starting changing thought patterns. Very good ..
Chloe
xoxo

[Pax Analog]

What I love about this little nugget is the way it juxtaposes a subtly simple Japanese form with an image of vital energy and the mood of magic.

Playful, provocative, profound.

[Legion]

Lovely haiku. Pic goes nicely with it.

[Ladysue]

Wow, this had tremedous depth for such a short poem. Amazing!

[R J Askew]

This one drove me nuts as I thought there is a rhyme here, but where is it. Of course it is the half rhyme of FI-eld and RE-al ... I now also have dark horses galloping around in my head. Again, good to see you into different styles.

[Lady V]

Amazing. Appolonia.........You are a wonderful writer and your work always has beauty in it. The pictures are what make your work come alive. Great piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V