Impact

deliberately short...a bit different...

 

 

We crashed Heaven

This evening;

The stars -

Wouldn't interfere;

The planets -

Laughed ~

Even Venus;

The moon

Needed nothing -

But

Tonight...

 

 

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

It seems to me, the shorter you write, the more difficult it is to fully appreciate it, as in others, I will have to read this over and over again trying to find all meanings, yet, this is not a bad criticism, I love it when a writing encourages me to ponder through it, trully marvelous. Excellent writing.

[Lady V]

First, the imagery you have with your poems are amazing. Second, this piece is so dear to my heart bc its paints the picture of the artist who creates new pieces of art throughout the night. There is no sleep when an artist is at work. Third, Your poems always intrigue the reader into a wider definition of life. I enjoy reading your work. Thanks for the read request.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Jibey]

Stirs the imagination... made its point without elaboration... Less is more...

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Awwww.....this was so.....beautiful!
Simple and short but yet so deep and thoughtful.
Great work :)

[Sorry Infamous]

Simply beautiful to read.

[Reeses]

Wreckless love... =)

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Excellent. This is a perfect description of shared passion and how all else is blocked out by two in two lovers. Beautiful imagery perfectly placed. Eloquent and sensual is how I would describe this.

[Luna]

This is very simple yet elegant. Great work.

[Alicante lullaby]

lovely...short,beautiful..perfect

[Tate Morgan]

simply beautiful

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful expression of life and love and laughter that fills all the universe. This is a stunning, beautiful write!