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Tis what Tis, folks...

Life continues to unfold as she discovers herself with each alluring indigo sunset and seductive dawn, blushing sometimes...


In modesty she unravels kindness and gentility that chaos dare not destroy...


For her strength reigns...


'If I were another persona, who would become me?'  --a passionate red rose coveted with prickly thorns of yesterday...  She welcomes them...


Unafraid...


She is violet...blue...pink...aquamarine...peridot...


Iridescent,


especially on Sunday...


She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some walk away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions...

Now, she sighs a happy sigh, bidding auf wiedersehen as the Heavens reach down and kiss her subtle pink lips with gratitude...making their offer...

She sips java in a room adorned with heroic crystal chandeliers and silken white drapes and linens where she and her new lover share chocolate truffles and plump strawberries with cream, yet she knows if he should banish into the foggy London night during midsummer...

she
will
ascend...

even after Death...

Reviews

[Bertie]

"She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some have walked away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions..."
My favorite bit :)
You've really succeeded in creating a character here, a mystical and romantic character that plays with the reader senses.
Well done :)
x

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Appolonia such a touching poem very beautiful...Colorful, romantic and sweet and tender filled with gems, goddesses and love.

Chloe

[Pax Analog]

Venus and Aphrodite are the same goddess, love, Roman and Greek.

The rest is Libran lusciousness. Of course Venus rules your sign.

I think you mean "vanish" over "banish" tho' the latter intrigues.

The epiphany in the midst of lush loverdom that Love is self-sufficient unto the great beyond is sublime. Love is Zen is Love.

You subsume beauty's bounty into exquisite transparency.

[Legion]

That is the strength of those that know life is for living not dying. A beautiful piece and glad to see you again. I give this two hooves up. Well done. ;)

[MuSe Ampoule]

So many beautiful lines! Brilliant write!

[OT]

Oh I love this!! the descriptions are brilliant!! - "yet she knows if he should banish into the foggy London night during midsummer...

she
will
ascend...

even after Death..."

oh yes!! brilliant!! welcome back!

[Erotic Goddess]

She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some have walked away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions...

Lovely haunting prose here...I love this sweetheart. You do such a great job of building a poem from the ground up...Stunning.

xxoxx

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, very beautiful piece! Very vibrant and colorful descriptions, and you've painted a very lovely picture with plenty of rich words. Awesome! :)

M.

[Art]

so much depth within this poem Appolonia...even with love embraced and knowing it could all dissapear within a moment one can be content that all is as it should be...and even after... we fly within the skies...

[emmajoy]

This is a silk plait of sadness yet tied with a strong ribbon of patience. Such love, such wonderful use of colour-full phrases, memories, wonderment in finding self .. there are layers of emotion in every line ..

[Ladysue]

so good to see you writing again. missed your writing.. This flowed with a beautiful sensual tone..so soft. The beginning drew me in and was captivated throughout...much enjoyed...