X

X

A Poem by April Child

It’s just a kiss


on a text message.


It doesn’t mean anything


like..


I can’t get you out of my head,


I’m having weird daydreams about “us”,


I’ve got butterflies and


my butterflies have got butterflies.


 

It’s just a kiss.

© 2012 April Child


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'my butterflies have got butterflies'..:) That made me smile..a lot.
It's indeed a beautiful feeling when you find a poet giving word to a certain feeling or state of mind in their own way,something you had wanted to name..point out in the past, but now you know what to call it. So yeah I have felt 'butterflies within butterflies too..:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I was drawn to this because of the title. I too wrote a poem called 'X' several years ago (not posted on this site), but the content is somewhat different from yours. Mine was basically about my ex-wife, although X stands for several things in my poem. But back to your poem: very nicely expressed, in a delightfully understated way. X can stand for almost anything, and here it certainly stands for much more than a text message kiss. Well penned! ~ Robert.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The x's can be so important sometimes for girls in a message. :P you sum it up how we worry over some x's and think about them too much perfectly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'...It's just a kiss.' Wise. The longing for more? Greatful for truth? Yes, yes.
Enjoyed reading "X". Good work~ pat

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's sweet. This poem is refreshingly innocent with underlying tones of a deeper passion. It's simply a joy to read--I loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sweet poem filled with innocence and unspoken passion. Excellent write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah young love how sweet it is .and how painful it can be

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'my butterflies have got butterflies'..:) That made me smile..a lot.
It's indeed a beautiful feeling when you find a poet giving word to a certain feeling or state of mind in their own way,something you had wanted to name..point out in the past, but now you know what to call it. So yeah I have felt 'butterflies within butterflies too..:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kissing is the most intimate thing you can do, and we know how one thing leads to another... I like the humor injected into the sweet sentiment you expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Its just love ... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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April Child
April Child

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I love words and I like to write poems. Sometimes words just come and I don't know where from but I write them down anyway. There's something very powerful in the written word. It shows you where y.. more..

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