Transcendent

For a good friend of mine. When you find your twin flame, they will move heaven and earth to love you. Each star will yearn for just one song from your splendid voice.

Voices collided among the crashing wind struck waves. 

Red trembling kisses summoned under the fiery stars. 

Fingers intertwined from the rising yellow jaded sun. 

Violent gazes trapped within graceful lightning bursts. 

Blissful imaginative dreams come alive in thunderous reality. 

Your magnetic attractive name will be etched in her heart. 

Breathe your wonderous soul into her deathly woes. 

Even the bees linger for just a taste of it. 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Extraordinarily rich and raw emotions jumping from the screen: no doubts or control involved, your emotions - love and lust unashamedly displayed, as intended to be!

'Your magnetic attractive name will be etched in her heart.
Breathe your wonderous soul into her deathly woes.
Even the bees linger for just a taste of it.'

No doubt of that,

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This poem is amazing! I love the imagery and the choice of words they are limned in. I wish it was longer, I wish it wouldn't end. It has all the works of a story. Tyfs

[April Blue]

Thank you very much.. Limn , that's a beautiful descriptive word. I am actually writing a short poem for the same amazing friend that I wrote this poem for so I am going to incorporate this poem into the story.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I enjoyed how you captured the attraction of allurement in your poem. The evocative imagery truly defines the theme of your piece. Thank you for sharing your art with us.

[April Blue]

Carlos, Thank you for taking the time to read this poem and your inspiring words.

[Chris Shaw]

These lines are passionate in their description. I can definitely feel a magnetic pull here. Your friend should be pleased with this poem April. Good to read you.

Chris

[April Blue]

Chris, Thank you for reading this poem. My friend enjoyed the poem. I wish everyone could truly find their twin flame and be completely content with love. I hope that all people can find a piece of their lover in this poem.