Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.
Diego
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wr.. read morethank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wrote it while "daydreaming" at work.. wishing to be anything and anywhere else.. these images are what flowed from my pen.. I appreciate your time and thoughts, it means a lot coming from someone who writes as well as you do:)
If only I am allowed to criticize, I would say just a WOW.
The four lines, "If I were an angel...sinful amd divine" - an exceptionally beautiful creation.
The rhythm is fabulously managed throughout and I LOVED this. :) :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
this is a pretty awesome review, thank you so much.. tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. did it whil.. read morethis is a pretty awesome review, thank you so much.. tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. did it while daydreaming during meeting at work... shhhh don't tell anyone... :D
if i were a dictionary, acquanting brains with diction and articulation, i would know all these words at a go.i did a lot of dictionary check on this poem, but i am glad it brings more than just reading but vocab building and it really stimulates excitemnet.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
haha, cute.. I am a word nerd, what can I say.. hope it was still enjoyable, despite the need for as.. read morehaha, cute.. I am a word nerd, what can I say.. hope it was still enjoyable, despite the need for assistance.. thank you my friend.. nice to see you! hope you have been well.. :)
Thank you again.. not sure I'd wanna fly... think I would choose a different super power.. tickled y.. read moreThank you again.. not sure I'd wanna fly... think I would choose a different super power.. tickled you enjoyed this scribble.
9 Years Ago
You have a problem with heights....yeeek me too haha
Like your reply about doodling during a boring meeting. I do it all the time. Mostly it's tolerated, but occasionally I get a frown from a higher being.
T
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
well, hello there! nice to meet you.. I am the boss for most purposes, but have to act like I am lis.. read morewell, hello there! nice to meet you.. I am the boss for most purposes, but have to act like I am listening most of the time.. haha.. glad you could relate and enjoyed.. thank you for this lovely review.. I would love to return the favor, is there a specific piece you would like me to check out?.. a favorite perhaps?
Wow, a new take on the childish fantasies. Your word choice is perfect! My favourite lines would be
"infatuation’s aphrodisiac
dulcet, aromatic affection"
This one ticks all the right boxes!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for this lovely, glowing review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble :)
Simplistic, real, soothing, meaningful....what more can I say. This really makes me question my own thought processes. This gives light to hope and that we should never judge by what we perceive....
Nice April:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
thank ya.. it came about actually from me doodling on my notebook during a boring meeting at work.. .. read morethank ya.. it came about actually from me doodling on my notebook during a boring meeting at work.. I drew an angel, and a flower and just started scribbling.. I am tickled you like it... :)
well hey you!! thank you so much.. This was a little scribble that started out with me daydreaming d.. read morewell hey you!! thank you so much.. This was a little scribble that started out with me daydreaming during a meeting at work.. lol
I was tickled with the way it came out, and am tickled that you enjoyed it:)
thank you DJ.. it is always a pleasure to see you my friend..